Friday, November 23, 2012

Heremaia Naritive

On a burning hot day my brother and I we went to go dive off the Groyne. The only thing that was different was the wind when I went diving off the Groyne. I knocked my head on a rock and started to drown.My brother did not know what happen because he left. Then as my body floated up I began to breath.

I heard the wind in the distance and a noise. I realized that noise, it was my brother. I shouted from a far away, "Toko”.He did not reply. I was so scared, I thought that the end of my life was near. I took one more try, one more clonk of air and shouted from the top of my lungs, "TOKO”. He replied “where are you?" I took my last bit of air and out of the corner of my eye was a shadow, a tall black shadow coming towards me.

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