Friday, November 23, 2012

Heremaia bush writing

One morning Jacob went for a jog with his friends Alex,Tom and Jerry after a furious rainstorm in the forest.They were jogging to the forest where the rainstorm was.They finally got to the forest and in front of their eyes was the biggest mud puddle. Jacob,Alex,Tom and Jerry were terrified so they ran around. What they did not know was that was the only way to get out, and it was where the big puddle was.

It was getting darker and they were still stuck in the forest. Jerry was shaking with horror as the night fell. They were all shaking, they all thought their was no way out and their end was near. As the sun rose they set off. They went under bushes, over branches and had nothing to eat.

Still no site of the exit, still stuck, still hungry. As days went by they started to lose hope into finding their way out. But on the other side of the forest were unexpected sounds. They all heard it, they all ran, they all thought it was the exit but then it stopped, just dead stop. It was like they were all drawn away from it to get out.


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