Wednesday, April 3, 2013

Heremaia finding nemo




Down in the deep blue sea Marlin laid his head flat on a rock. Dory swam towards Marlin and advised “Hey Mr Grumpy Gills when life gets you down, you know what you gotta do? Marlin angrily discuses ”I don’t know what you gotta do” with a curious look on his face.


Dory sang “Just keep swimming, just keep swimming, just keep swimming, swimming, swimming what do we do? We swim swim” She sang while going deeper and deeper.
Marlin roared” Dory. no singing” Dory ignored him and kept singing “I love to swim. When you want to swim” They swam deeper and deeper into the dark. Marlin with a angry face stretched with fear  ” See i’m gonna get stuck now with that song now it’s stuck in my head”. Dory moaned “ Sorry”.

1 comment:

LoganE said...

Hey heremaia

I like your peace of writing it shows how Dory can be very happy, and marlin can be very negative about things. Keep up the great work.